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[Blue Jay]

I'm lucky that my parents mostly stopped smoking before I was born. My dad went back to it in secret and ended up having a heart attack because of it while in the woods. We found out about it then!

[Cae]

None of my parents smoke, my grandmother did at one point I think, so did my dad. My Grandfather kept smoking till the day he died though.

[Blue Jay]

Yeah once my dad had that attack he stopped for good.

[Cae]

Eh, kinda wish my grandfather had stopped, but what happens, happens.
Anyways, on to a much lighter issue, I finshed my poems, and was about to pick one, when I realized... they were all too long, so I looked at them all, and threw something together, that went along with them all. So now I have this poem, that I'd like to submit.

[+] SPOILER

Many hearts are given on this day.
And chocolates are given too.
However I find it kind of dumb.
That we all have to do it this way.

So I think we should burn it all.
Until everything is in ashes.
Then maybe, they will get the point.
And if they don't just turn it into a brawl.

And ruin those who don't understand.
That there is no point to this day.
And that it should be smashed.
Until this holiday is banned.

[Blue Jay]

Mika will add it to the front page as soon as she gets back here! XD

[Cae]

She'd better get back here soon then. xD

[Mika]

But I don't wanna!..... I like vanishing for long periods of unexplained time!
I love how you guys keep up a ryhme scheme even though I said it could totally be free verse. /isn't a fan of ryhmes/

[Cae]

Lol. I tend to rhyme without meaning too sometimes, and I've never really been all that great free verse.

[Mika]

My running alhas always been traumatic.... So I've always done free verse unless I was forced to do a ryhme.... I recall I poem in fifth grade that had to ryhme and be about a pet... And it didn't make any sense, but the teacher kept asking me all these questions about why did I use that word and blah blah blah.... I will have to fetch a poem of mine one day...

[Cae]

Lol. You do that, it would be interesting to read.

[Mika]

Well I do have one in a book, surprisingly. But my last year in high school I was dabbling with a very different style of poetry... Recalling that every line had its own individual meaning. Haha. People looked at me like a was nuts for writing a poem the way I did. Hrrrrm.... Its hurried around here somewhere..... /goes rummaging through a stack of books/

[Cae]

Lol. sounds very interesting indeed.

[Mika]

....those moments when you cant find anything.... I was sure I had my old binder in the house... But I guess I have to check the building..... /puts on her boots and trudges to the building/

[Cae]

Best of luck in finding it.

[Blue Jay]

Rhyming is something way to easy you see. When it comes to poems it comes naturally to me. I'm never in a bind or a fix. Since a word or two can always change what's in the mix. However there are times when a word just won't do. I'm pretty sure my rhyming has begun to bug you!

*hides and dodges Mika's attacks*