So I'm making a webcomic-ANTICIPATION

[Kitalpha Hart]

Yaaaaay ou o

[Ryvvi]

i thought the title was "alas in wonderland" for a moment xD
thought of a shakespeare/alice in wonderland fusion
whats it about? and can we see more panels?!

[Kitalpha Hart]

Alas in Wonderland? Someone else can do that XD

Wonderland has been taken over by the Black King, Heart and Diamond forced into hiding, and Alice's Soul has fled to a boy instead of the usual blonde British girl, who learns on a much later date about this, and that's about where the story starts
I really need to punch out the prologue it's giving me trouble coming into shape while on the main story I'm closing in on chapter 2 and Chess has been revealed as a pervert who can't seem to get enough of knowing that Alan, as he is referenced, is male
I'll think about giving more ou o
Not home right now

[Ryvvi]

that sounds cool!
cant wait to see more if you decide to post it!

[Kitalpha Hart]

ovo
The hardest part is actually working on it cuz I get bored pretty easily and need something to distract me at the same time

[Kitalpha Hart]

RAR
@galled
@Ryvvi

Currently working on this page, reads right to left

[galled]

OK, I get it. Very nice! Wish the lines/art was a little more contrasty tho. Try putting a light on the page the next time you take a pix. That should help with readability. But I like the style. Show us more!!

[Kitalpha Hart]

Well, when I upload it, it'll be scanned, plus you can tell it's not even finished right now, so a lot of that will be fixed before the proper upload ovo

[Kitalpha Hart]

RAR
galled
Ryvvi

Don't mind the shadow, that's just my hand and phone
But same panel, color added and words inked

Edit: there's three lines of color, and it's all Alan's hair, in case you can't see it

[|M|esh]

^^Hello;3 I like the premise of this webcomic, twists on Alice in Wonderland are always fun U.U
The sketches/panels so far look good, though the quality of the photo could be better. Do you have any image manipulation software like photoshop you could use alter contrast/levels/ect?

[Kitalpha Hart]

@"|M|esh"
Seeing as these are just pics taken from my phone, no
When I launch it'll actually be uploaded via scanner, so it'll look more like what you see in my dA

[galled]

Looks good, Kit! Lighting is better, but a bit of brightness and contrast adjustment would make a world of difference. I know it's a few steps more, but you could always transfer your photos from your phone to your computer and use a free program like The Gimp to finesse brightness and contrast. In fact, if I recall correctly, there's even an auto contrast feature that'll do it for you!

Please show us more when you're ready.

[Kitalpha Hart]

I don't have a computer and as I keep pointing out, these are pics. The pages will be scanned in when the webcomic launched!

[galled]

Oh, sorry. I didn't know that...

[Kitalpha Hart]

Hence OP being edited because everyone's ragging on it
And I get irritated having to say the same thing twenty times