by yorunaka » Thu Sep 21, 2017 11:50 pm
Lol they were the ones that showed up first. Had no background on ML when I started (despite being aware that it existed for a few years) so I watched the first subbed first episode video I could find on YT. lol
And there are quite a few which have good flow in writing in general plus interesting premises. But at some point, the plot just gets too drawn out or even worse, I don't know where it's going anymore at all ;;
To be honest, "Back to Us" was close to being too drawn out for me. Couldn't also help that the reason for Chat's viciousness wasn't quite strong in my opinion. However, the good points in the fic still outweighed the less developed one. It also helped that it was one of the few ML fics I've read which wrote Adrien's and Marinette's friendship really well (I'm biased towards this pairing out of the whole LadyNoir/MariChat/Ladrien/Adrinette thing)
And thank you! I appreciate that